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The craft

Rhythm

English is a stressed language. We do not sing long and short vowels the way Latin did; we bump some syllables and let others slip. Metre is the pattern those bumps fall into — and the art is in the pattern breaking.

Stress, not syllable-counting

Beginners count syllables and call it metre. That is how haiku is often (wrongly) taught, and how English verse is never made. Say photograph, photography, photographic. The stresses move. A metrical line is a sequence of those stresses, grouped into feet.

Scansion is the practice of marking them: ˘ for unstressed, / for stressed — or, more honestly, a light tap and a heavier one, because real speech is not binary. When in doubt, say the line as if you meant it, not as if you were obeying a metronome.

The principal feet

  • Iamb ˘ / — to-DAY, a-BOVE, the sea. The default of English verse, because it mimics ordinary speech with a slight lift.
  • Trochee / ˘ — TY-ger, GAR-den. Falling, incantatory, good for spells and nursery threats.
  • Anapest ˘ ˘ / — in-ter-VENE, to the SEA. Galloping, comic or wave-like.
  • Dactyl / ˘ ˘ — EL-e-phant, TAKE her up. The waltz foot; also the opening of the Iliad in English imitations.
  • Spondee / / — HEART-BREAK, DEAD STOP. Rare as a true foot; common as a substitution that slams the brakes.
  • Pyrrhic ˘ ˘ — two light syllables, usually a guest inside a heavier line.

How lines are named

Count the feet, then name the prevailing one. Iambic pentameter is five iambs: ten syllables in the textbook, but in practice a flexible ten-ish, because English cheats (elision, feminine endings, an extra slack syllable at the end). Tetrameter is four feet; trimeter three; hexameter six. Ballads often alternate tetrameter and trimeter. Shakespeare’s plays think in pentameter even when they break it.

The lamp beside the window holds the night.
the LAMP | be-SIDE | the WIN | dow HOLDS | the NIGHT — five iambs, no decoration required.

Interactive metre lab

Tap the syllables you hear as stressed, then check them against a conventional reading. There is always argument at the edges. That argument is the beginning of having an ear.

Iambic pentameter (da-DUM × 5). Tap a syllable if you hear it as stressed.

Substitution, the real craft

A line of perfect iambs is a metronome, not a poem. The tradition expects you to substitute: a trochee at the opening (“Now is the winter of our discontent”), a spondee for weight, an anapest for hurry. Metre is a promise you keep often enough that the exceptions speak. If you keep it always, the poem is a hymn-tune. If you keep it never, you are writing free verse and should say so.

A feminine ending adds an unstressed eleventh syllable to a pentameter (“To be, or not to be: that is the question”). It softens the close. A catalectic line is missing a slack syllable — truncated, marching.

Blank verse

Unrhymed iambic pentameter is blank verse: Shakespeare, Milton, Wordsworth, much of Frost. It is the closest metre comes to conversation without falling into prose. If you want to write a long meditative poem and you are not yet at home in free verse, blank verse will carry you further than rhyme will.

Cadence without metre

Free verse still has rhythm: the length of the breath, the clustering of stresses, the return of a phrase. Hopkins’s sprung rhythm counted only the stresses and let the slacks swarm. Jazzed, Biblical, Whitman’s catalogues — all of these are rhythmic systems. “No metre” is not “no pulse.” See Free verse.

Once the pulse is in the body, decide whether the line-ends will chime: Rhyme.